Open Poetry #34 |
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A Maple Cried |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Leaves cascading from stately trees, Their days of glory are ending. They swirl about in the autumn winds, As their branches bare are bending. Noble trees now unadorned, Their cloaks have dulled and died. Standing naked before beast and man, A shivering maple cried. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and when the warmth returns again, it shall smile again. Very well done Linda! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Linda.. and if the leaves weren't off the trees as of yet, they sure will be with the winds of the approaching storm today. Warm Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Linda .... It 's sad that the poor maples are naked and shivering. But soon they will have on a beautiful white coat that will keep them warm till their Spring clothes return from storage. Sending you hugs for such a remarkable piece. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel And the Maples cry so sweet. ![]() |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
this is exactly how I feel about fall, and the falling leaves...excellent write |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
they do tend to look regal to me too amid their nakedness daring us to look away from their stark beauty |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big angel hugs) Oh Linda, when I was a little boy, I always felt the sight of a tree without leaves was one of the most depressing sights of all, forests felt like graveyards to me and represented my world when I was struggling! (sigh) Today, the sight still isn't pretty to me, but I see it a new way now; the witnessing and testimonial of hope perservering even in the most languid of times and its rewards in the end with life returning and faith blossoming when you channel hope and patience together! God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so touching |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna ~ Your reply was as gentle as your spirit! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ I awoke to a winter wonderland ~ well alost! It was more like a scattering of snowflakes ~ but they sure looked beautiful! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Marti! Yes, a nice, thick snowy coat will insulate them against the cold winter winds! From the looks of it outside my window ~ that won't be long! The ground is now covered with a light, coverlet of that white stuff! lol ![]() Loveya! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Yes, their cry is a soft 'sy'.... ![]() ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
jellybeans ~ Hi, there stranger! Good to hear from you! Trees are also beautiful in their filigree nakedness ~ but I cannot help but feel for them! ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goddess of Inked Ones and Trees ~ I totally concur. ![]() ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ As we live and grow our perceptions of the world around us, change. You are growing into a mighty fine oak! Loving hugs 'n smiles sent your way! Linda ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing ~ "Touching" is touching... ![]() ![]() EA |
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