Open Poetry #34 |
All I Can Say |
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What can I tell you? How do I fight the fear that would lead to drown and sail the shores of belief? What relief can I offer that won't be recognized as lies or wishful thinking? You deserve more than that. With spirits sinking I acknowledge lack of words excepting these few: I love you. I'm praying. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love you. I'm praying. ~*~ Ditto. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Laura, this is simply beyond. When you write free verse, you show dimensions of yourself that you never quite reveal when there's form to hide you.... and yes, this is one I know you feel deeply. I'm there with you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
suthern I love you. I'm praying. Words that I say every day too. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I love you. I'm praying." Me too gal..me too. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Reading blue pages thru tears is kinda tough..yanno? |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm with you, suthern gal.... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And perhaps those few words are enough...beautifuly said. Eric |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah lady, *you* are shining through this beatifully, lucky is the one you pray for...sigh, you share so much strength |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ditto the feeling! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you all so very much... And Toe... I know. *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
All you can say? I think those few words say more than volumes in any language could. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm so choked up, I can't write a decent reply ~ but you certainly expressed your loving and honest feelings with utmost grace and beauty. I hear you. I'm with you. I'm praying. Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You know I'm with you. Wonderful write. |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Lovely poem, I loved the honesty that this poem entailed. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A dozen great big hugs shipped Fedex Saturday Delivery...On the way.... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Prayers are poetry too... Pepper |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearLady~ I hold your tears ... and hold that 'special' one in prayerful vigil~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This just hits the gut. Well done! Prayer never seems to hurt! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
offering my support and prayers M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Spoken from a heart as big as Texas... please add a tardy moths thoughts and prayers to this. hearthugs |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The gift of love - held high in prayer - Make room for mine as well... |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
loved it |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
**bump** am praying, love you both |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sending my prayers along too, while pacing to hear from you or someone. Keep the faith, he is a tough one as you know. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
as am I also holding thoughts and prayers for one so special, and you Suthern, are so very special yourself... HEART HUGS The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you all so very much. Your friendship and support mean so much.... *S* No word yet... |
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