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In My Words to Yours
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In My Words to Yours |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In My Words to Yours Within the falling of the leaves there are bits of bloom reminding me that the sun does shine even if hidden behind the clouds. As the silent mist creeps in to allow for the cool hug of November, I am in solitary sit holding in my empty hands, thoughts filled with your essence. Olden fears enter the darkness following the trail...of words. Loving those lost to love, even if not belonging to me. "I lay down, Deeper than I ever stood, Lost to love." Stretching time, existing for the now, celled by the silence of the pale read brick walls I await... Someone to touch, to not be alone Actions to fill this, my solitary home. M *with a bit of thought borrowing* "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
thought borrowing... sounds good coming from your pen.  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well wriiten but sadness surfaces too...there are people at pip that will talk...and express thoughts...thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Tremendous write....vivid and harrowing pulled me in and wouldn't let go Very well done! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Someone to touch, to not be alone yes! Nice to read you  Maree into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent way of expressing your thoughts M. Enjoyed the read and sending big hugs. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree with all above! Excellent write. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sounds like from the heart Good words Dave |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
"Loving those lost to love" sort of has a poetic ring to it, alliterative to say the least I enjoy your writing. Hope you know you have a lot of friends here Dautz |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are beautiful and the sun does shine |
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