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The Bath |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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It was late, slowly I ran the hot water, until it filled the tub, I put on some soft music, (your music) As I began to undress, I thought of you, relaxed, I stepped, toe first into the water, Oh! my acheing back, could use a rub, from soft, gentle hands, filled with a touch, of love, As I layed back, I began to think thoughts, of you and I, some happy, some made me cry, This is my time to think, listening to love songs, so many poems dance, across my head, I'd rather be with you instead, A million words, between us both, but yet, not one, single touch, that is alot to say, about love, Is it not? I close my eyes, and I escape to your world, of laughter, our conversations, and I want you more, My heart grows inches, pressing against my chest, so filled with love, beating, it cannot rest, Minutes, hours go by, song after song, and I lay there, silently still, I wonder why, I can't be where I belong, What is fantasy? What is real? Like a fish caught, in a net, the tub, confines me, binds me, Yet I want to be free, to swim in oceans, I have yet to see, The only freedom, for this pisces mermaid, is shedding her skin, taking her bath, at a quarter till ten, Thinking thoughts of you, over and over again, with the strength of your love, One day she will break free, of the tub, and swim...swim...swim.... Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (11-23-2004 03:24 AM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This poem i like a lot..it has the quintessential touch of the most loving heart in the world....one that means the world to me..thank you.... Love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, beautiful! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"pisces mermaid" I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! You are a compelling writer, have an artistic flair, know more than you tell, and, I bet, sometimes tell more than you should. But your writings draw the reader in and you can make a point with a pen, or with a chunk of coal. Thanks for sharing. I do enjoy your poetry… Really! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Poignantly beautiful. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely writing...James |
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