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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Searching, I can hear the ways of flocks Baggy shirt tails hanging out Loose little maids, in each of them Close together…but… Not to close, as to bump each other~ Flying in V’s like geese Meeting panic, whispering beauty With obscene language Course-minded, footloose hobos Blending, uneventful plots Or so it seems? Looking this way and that Like slap-stick jesters Selling the extreme image Hipsters and midriffs Shooting heroine into the minds of quick and easy Dependents of, soaked little towns fatigued Each of them, scratching into history Advertising survival instincts Selling masks on EBay Jaded boards with impeccable form Carrying a financial planner of suffrage Investing in Eros Joining with vision care coverage Playing hopscotch with children While….. Sprawling porches, flicker candle eyes focused On some great white wicker chair Rocking, rocking Connecting artful passions flared Like the angry nostril of a horse Coasting…through hallucinations fair haired Chewing the lower lips of fat grey-haired men Raising sugar beets in silence & fear Purring light-fingered little stones Glistening like sleek fresh oils Tucking field-harvested options Into daybreak at the end of time But…. Waiting, like a chemistry class On muscle building mission Watching riverbanks, Plunge toward the breasts of oceans Traveling like pilgrims, in occupied boats Flattering the cleavage of motherhood Where she gossips bout fine looking deals While watching Dr. Phil Her fairy-tale lifts itself into moaning hearts Working round the clock Laying naked beneath church steeples Writing a to-do list with a safety net of rulers Just as well, undertones, dare to hope The reverend will speak soon With split lips, and tufts of patchy scabs In admirable precise courage and form I inquire, “Are you the man I’m looking for”? He smiles that, putting things together smile Answering softly with melodic thought “My two hands cover pride Underneath all the rust, I imagine Fine-looking feme soles, comes with the deal?” I smile catching his secret code With a baseball mitt Looking deep into his eyes & Opening a creaky door that breaths a perky sigh Responding softy, “Come on In We’ve been repairing violins” He smiles, enters while mumbling “Funny, what a woman inspires?” While handing me a miniature alabaster of The Pieta |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
little different step in you today you are looking closer at the mirrors well penned and well explored too enjoyed ms |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You have so many gems here it woud take a lifetime to examin them all. Morning sweet. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You are such a beautiful writer! Eric |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Lee You really are coming to town Dave |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Flattering the cleavage of motherhood Where she gossips bout fine looking deals While watching Dr. Phil Her fairy-tale lifts itself into moaning hearts Working round the clock Laying naked beneath church steeples Writing a to-do list with a safety net of rulers Just as well, undertones, dare to hope The reverend will speak soon With split lips, and tufts of patchy scabs In admirable precise courage and form I inquire, “Are you the man I’m looking for”? He smiles that, putting things together smile Answering softly with melodic thought “My two hands cover pride Underneath all the rust, I imagine Fine-looking feme soles, comes with the deal?” ~*~ Write the novel.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yes LeeJ... Do write the novel, and put me on the list. You have a rich dialogue in every write you post, and it reveals a spirit that is as beautiful as it is elegant. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yep, LeeJ, my friend...you are really amazing....write...novel, poetry, whatever...just write!  |
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