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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-22 08:21 AM

redwood of lady hair
mist of morning terpsichore
where giants are quiet
their utterings without wind

river is bangle shimmer
wrist wound bracalet winding
damp the charms of vale
with earth in love skin

night cape indigotin
on shoulders of flaxen
cling of furrow vaporing
maiden with woman mind

and she dances her soul
in the dark water
she is the current under
that bestirs dark stones

into the mirage of dayspeak

_____________

Dark

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2004-10-22 08:31 AM

Oh, I like this ...

and she dances her soul
in the dark water
she is the current under
that bestirs dark stones

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-10-22 08:36 AM

my most favorite time of the day, and you have penned her well

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-10-22 08:41 AM

and she dances her soul
in the dark water
she is the current under
that bestirs dark stones

into the mirage of dayspeak

yes....this is wonderful imagery Dark.
Good morning hugs.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-10-22 08:42 AM

Ok.
Morning coffee, check.
Read DS, check.
Sigh heavy, check.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2004-10-22 08:56 AM

mmm perfect harmony..
with undertones

K

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-10-22 10:35 AM

Oooooh Dark - I feel the mood of the forest, of the Redwoods, of the stir of nature and her sensuality - and I want to be there - to feel her kiss and wrap myself in her arms - to be the maiden that stirs the waters -

Love the feel of this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-10-23 07:14 PM

Liked the sensual description of the Redwood forest, and the last line was particularly splendid. You have the broadened view of a prophet.
TD

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2004-10-23 07:45 PM

Dark~
OMG !
The beauty of this is simply stunning~
Read three times ... so far~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-10-23 08:38 PM

DS

I know this place...it is beautiful!

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

10 posted 2004-12-06 02:19 PM

night cape indigotin
on shoulders of flaxen
cling of furrow vaporing
maiden with woman mind

~*~

Tell me then
of other lives
and the paths taken
by your footsteps...

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