Open Poetry #34 |
euphony of jade |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
redwood of lady hair mist of morning terpsichore where giants are quiet their utterings without wind river is bangle shimmer wrist wound bracalet winding damp the charms of vale with earth in love skin night cape indigotin on shoulders of flaxen cling of furrow vaporing maiden with woman mind and she dances her soul in the dark water she is the current under that bestirs dark stones into the mirage of dayspeak _____________ Dark |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, I like this ... and she dances her soul in the dark water she is the current under that bestirs dark stones |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my most favorite time of the day, and you have penned her well |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and she dances her soul in the dark water she is the current under that bestirs dark stones into the mirage of dayspeak yes....this is wonderful imagery Dark. Good morning hugs. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok. Morning coffee, check. Read DS, check. Sigh heavy, check. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
mmm perfect harmony.. with undertones K |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oooooh Dark - I feel the mood of the forest, of the Redwoods, of the stir of nature and her sensuality - and I want to be there - to feel her kiss and wrap myself in her arms - to be the maiden that stirs the waters - Love the feel of this - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Liked the sensual description of the Redwood forest, and the last line was particularly splendid. You have the broadened view of a prophet. TD |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark~ OMG ! The beauty of this is simply stunning~ Read three times ... so far~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I know this place...it is beautiful! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
night cape indigotin on shoulders of flaxen cling of furrow vaporing maiden with woman mind ~*~ Tell me then of other lives and the paths taken by your footsteps... |
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