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Open Poetry #34
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SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts
0 posted 2004-11-21 02:56 PM

Glistening tears roll down my cheeks
Turn into diamonds and fall at your feet
I’d do just about anything to fall in your arms
To win back all the charm
If I could go back in time
Do it all over again
I’d be better
Make a lasting impression
Have you want to be mine
But I’ve lost
Lost once again
Always ruining things
Losing things I’ve gained
Hands letting go
My soul has been stained
With your memory
I refuse to let it go
So it hurts me
Kills me as I go
The footsteps
Ride out the storm
As the thunder
Shakes my world
It all falls apart
You walk away
My heart breaks apart
My life is incomplete
Until you hold me
Again
© Copyright 2004 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-11-21 03:08 PM

Even though I want to remind you of the truth that you are complete on your own ... I understand how you feel and you have conveyed your pain quite powerfully.

Sadly beautiful.

Love, Margherita
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2004-11-21 03:29 PM

Sara~
It is so good to see you~

Heart-rendered penning with some sad, sad ink~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-11-22 04:40 AM

sometimes it's hard to let go, and sometimes we never do
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
4 posted 2004-11-23 02:28 PM

My soul has been stained
With your memory


I know this kind of staining Sarah....
very well done gal.
Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
Posts 980
Ca
5 posted 2004-11-23 02:59 PM

Amazing!!! Very well written
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2004-11-23 04:06 PM

Sara

I felt so much emotion through your words.  Thanks for sharing.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins
Jason Lyle
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Posts 1438
With my darkling
7 posted 2004-11-23 04:49 PM

Great, heartfelt writing.Maybe it wasn't your fault this time...

Jason
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