Open Poetry #34 |
Pitch |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Out to make a final sale A pitch thrown to no avail Do dungeons have clear glass windows where life flies by on headphones to make it look good for quality control wrap up more deals and on the roll reems of lines thrown for pitch to catch whatever deal for the listener to grasp shades stay pulled on this sales den on inbound calls the horror of a duped final dale a dilemma of sun and hale all for a noxious pitch the final sale freedom curtailed to make it look good for quality control wrap up more deals and on the roll |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Are you trying to sell me something?....hmmm. nicely done. Jason |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah yes, - the sales pitch - yet where would we be without snake oil? Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I could never "pitch a sale"...I don't take rejection well~~ M |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
As a salesman of over twenty years I enjoyed this quick ripping aside of the showroom curtain. Most thinking (certainly all feeling) people must get disgusted on occasion with the deceit necessary to justify capitalism. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
even the same salesperson can get disgusted when on the other side of the phone... |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hi Martin, I love this piece. I found a a way to end sales calls over the phone.I just go online LOL. :-) Have a good one my friend Within this heart you'll find love |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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