Open Poetry #34 |
Raspberry jam |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Comes under the heading of dont lose your temper when eating Dave Raspberry jam looks nice on the wall Jelly just calls it quits Sphagetti is easily led Whilst lasagna just gets on Interior design And can be quite a bind So I leave mine to the pets They have inspiration and tips Including fried bacon And seed forsaken And with me they are instant hits |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Jam certainly does best jelly Enjoyed - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
giggling yes, this is darling |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
funny thing about anger and temper tantrums... I would never throw nor waste anything nor wish to break or stain anything material over an emotion... now stomping my foot is another thing~~ *s M |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks Dave |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*laughs* Thanks for sharing this |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
oh my! lol..enjoyed... **babygiRL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
boy oh boy, I remember once when I was young errrr, younger....hehe and I was company for dinner...the father didn't like what the mother had cooked, and he threw it against the wall....I will never ever forget that...it left a horrible implant...after that, I didn't like him very much. Yes, agree whole heartidly with the otehr comments... thank you for sharing. sorry, I know you probably didn't mean this so seriously.... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks all for your comments. Lee You know I write from imagination but dont for whatever's sake stop making forthright comments to me. Have a look at the final Barnes rewrite, it is the final rewrite of half an idea that has taken years and still at some point is part of a long story that I will write but again, it is not my story, just images. Thanks once again to everyone. Dave |
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