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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148
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The message is received 30 percent of the time I sense a break through out on the horizon Her ship sails in circles Her future is a whirlpool She dodges a bullet & sinks into the knife 30 stitches later she's wading back into the tide |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Resilient and full of possibility...just as life, just as we. Well done. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved this! yes! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
a write of wishful hope... the wanting of what could be... love your style K |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
~K~, This is beautiful!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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~eternal child~ Junior Member
since 2004-11-23
Posts 31 |
"Her ship sails in circles Her future is a whirlpool" love the above lines the whole lot really including the format smile ~ec~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
much enjoyed..... ~C~ |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
resilience, defiance, ignorance, selfishness? whatever drives a person to do something (even when it could be possibly self destructive) really doesnt matter in the end... its the outcome that matters....and some of us actually think if we keep trying...somehow, the outcome will change. and that is worth the suffering  always enjoying your writing |
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