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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Perspective keys a deadbolt misconception Through cotton candy fog perpetual around the rosy road What comes in the patterning of raindrops? Sorrow or joy, dissipates in the heat of new found Reeling thread still tucked within the brighter times The gypsy in me gathers bits of vibrant cloth upon my walking stick Traveled light, in barefoot fields, returning to the blooms of plant Thrown into winds auspicious, scant and free Once known of sun, still shines…still brings to cloudy minds The vision of a banquet set upon the grass And memories make warm November pass The painting of tomorrow seeks remark Unbuttoned feelings float mosaics arch To land, the ringing bells resume embark And find me pushing paper boats along the stream serene Copyright Kkh 11/19/04 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The gypsy in me gathers bits of vibrant cloth upon my walking stick ~*~ I like this.... I would also love to know what your middle name might be...  another "K" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a scene |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
yes. very nice. well well rendered |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautifully penned Kathleen. Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
And find me pushing paper boats along the stream serene look over your shoulder...i'm there too with you  |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
"The painting of tomorrow seeks remark" (!) I loved this poem. I loved it's carefree nature, spilling truths in golden rivers. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
lovely write... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"To land, the ringing bells resume embark And find me pushing paper boats along the stream serene" I do agree, beautiful scenic poetry. JL |
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