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Hazy Dreams
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Hazy Dreams |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hazy Dreams In silence of my dreams I fall into your candid, unashamed love… You touch and reveal a dominant thought of, latent desires persistent of my cloudy visions. Sight of you with me stolen from a past desire you as you were then spirited and free… being there with me, in my dreams… Hazy, sleepy dreams of you. Dreams Surreal. Me… You… |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful dream-like quality to this piece. Very much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
In the silence of my dreams - yes - this was a great read -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sounds like a happy song which should be put to music  smiles and hugs good to see ya  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
JL, My how I liked this! I love how you weave words together, this was really beautiful. Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
kinda makes waking up depressing huh? enjoyed this |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I love it when you grin JL... A pour of sweet spring on this page...and no umbrella required. Thanks for sharing this. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
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