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Love Forever (Sonnet)
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Love Forever (Sonnet) |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Love Forever With tick of muted Universal clock Time surely carves the face of land and man; In equal measure one the other mock, For this wreckage exists no mortal ban. Touch of your hand my fire increases And stokes the furnace of our passion; The flame of our love never ceases And there exists no dividing ration. For I still see the one that I once met, Unmarked by Time's steady, artistic hand As it aims to collect the owing debt To Its Dominion of dust and sand. And when at last my lips with clay will meet My love for you will henceforth reign complete. CG |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Never do you disappoint, always a pleasure to read you, sir castleguard~ As to be expected, the beauty of love explodes from the words you have penned... Great to see you are back, creating beautiful love sonnets as ever! Love and Hugs~  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you know, no matter the pain, the despair, the heart break the angry words...true love embaces full, even in the colors of leaves...precious and poignant write.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I enjoyed this extremely lovely sonnet!  |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you so much for the kind comments. ARH - good to see you around, too. Your passionate poems, and posts, are always a delight to read. Thank you. CG |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! awesome formatting! awesome theme! wow! |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, James, passing shadows...appreciate the comments. CG |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I had to come back a second time and bump you, for I love ~love poetry, and you do it so well sir CastleGuard! One of my favorite poets, here at PIP! Love and Hugs~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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