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Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2004-11-17 04:51 PM

And he said, it rained so
hard on the way to California
And he said, that he could
hear their voices resound in his head
And he said, everything was such
a shock that it was like harboring angels
in the trunk of his car
And he said, if he had any energy left
he would have cryed till his tears turned to blood
And he said, he thought about me
on the way there
And he said, he wanted to
turn around and get me before leaving
And he said, he needed this
alone time to think
And he said, that I would
later need that time too
And he said, all expectations in life
faultered
And he said, "Release me!"
at the top of his lungs
And he said, the could hear him
but they wanted to stay
And he said, "I miss them."
And I said, "I miss them too."
And I said, "I'm sorry."
And he said, "I'm more sorry for you."

Love,
Ladycat

For the love of my parents and my brother..

"Everything changes, everything stays the same."-Bill Austin

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-11-17 06:58 PM

this ma'am...
aches....

my condolences for the pains around it..

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-11-17 07:04 PM

Ladycat

"I'm Sorry". Such hard words to say sometimes, especially with sincerity. The other person's part, the forgiving, is also hard. This poem was so poignant in the way it was written. Wishing all well!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-11-17 07:11 PM

I'm feeling sorry as well ~ for all concerned. A write that screams into my heart.

Love & Light,
EA

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2004-11-17 08:03 PM

...feeling your pain

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-11-18 01:01 PM

This is effectively done, it made me ache. The repetition worked well.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-11-18 01:04 PM

I too could feel the pain -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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