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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Heard I heard the music of the soul It filled the silence of the whole The drum that beat and beat and beat The rhythm of the dancing feet The ecstasy of weaving flail Hypnotic in a moan of wail A giving to delirium The serum of sensorium And hence it sense into a sigh The waters, earth and clouds on high Into a mill of turning will That could not leave the body still It echoed through the stamp of feet That kept the tempo of the beat To bring illusions fantasy To sway the mind in ecstasy And in the twisting dancing bend One and one touched end to end. |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
To bring illusions fantasy To sway the mind in ecstasy This poem and these great two lines struck a chord with me. Thank you for a great poem so early in the morning. Steve. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A giving to delirium The serum of sensorium ============================== Could that be any cooler????? Your wit and word play make me delightfully delirious LOL  Love the beat of your rhymes Sy-babers...youre starting our day out with a cadenced tune that will carry us along in your song.  *ww*    when you walked into the room it felt like time was standing still. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Dear Whirling Dervish! I enjoyed this sufi serving of serum sensorium! lol You are just full of surprises, aren't you!  May I have the next dance?   EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Play it again Sy. You've got us all dancing this morning. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
And hence it sense into a sigh The waters, earth and clouds on high Into a mill of turning will That could not leave the body still a very powerful sense, isn't it Sy? Good morning you master of words you Can I have the 2nd dance?  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! I'm getting dizzy here Sy! Those drums are pounding out quite a beat. Love this morning's read. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
What you heard was carried forward in what you wrote, Sy. This is excellent. Thank you for the morning's glory! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sy, you always write it so well.. Unfortunatly sometimes people see the fantasy as reality and don't ever live what is real... Mornin' darlin'!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I loved this entire piece, and the last couplet made it perfect! Hugs. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Steve, My pleasure, thank you my friend. JM, And you are my delirium. Winkiewinkie Earth Angel Not only the next but the one after that too. Hugs scorpio, Well then have a merry. LeeJ, powerful sense, now that's a high. You may have the second and third and Then my card is full. LOL Nancy, You are a dear, Hugs. Catrina, My ego thanks you for the flower. Susan, Real or fantasy, it's sometning. Hugs Ericc My ego thanks you. |
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