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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2004-11-17 04:36 AM

When we do not talk,
we pretend we have something to say: Something
urgent.
We
do something

different, catching the remanence
of words long dead.

I study closely,
the anatomy of your "love"
and "never".

Do you even

remember me anymore?

I swear I have forgotten,
you are now not but half a face,
partial skin,
a now rough embrace.

I drown smoothly
in the echos,
sharp edges of what was once
comfort..

It is not startling to me
when I stumble over
"unrequited" and
"alone".

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-11-17 07:16 AM

damn woman....

I do love how you write it....

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-11-17 08:55 AM

"It is not startling to me
when I stumble over
"unrequited" and
"alone"."

Ditto what Ron said...

I always know I am going to be floored when I click on your name.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-11-17 09:04 AM

Kaoru
You water sensitivity. Great write.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-11-17 09:13 AM

I love you awarness of what one needs, and to be able to be confident in knowing, and not accepting less.

Your a confident woman...

Good one sweetie...good morning

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2004-11-17 01:14 PM

Awe-some.

Eric

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2004-11-17 03:07 PM

Ouch! I sure felt the pain of that one, in once familiar time and place (got smart and ditched him.)

Great write Meghan.

JoshG
Member

since 2004-11-16

Posts 127
TX, USA

7 posted 2004-11-17 03:11 PM

I love the title of this piece. It really helps get the reader in the right frame of mind before diving in. It made the piece so much more intense. Your talent is something to be desired, but could only be delivered by your hand.

Nice Job,

Joshua

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-11-17 03:17 PM

WOW!! Excellent write Meghan.
Hugs to you and the little one.

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

9 posted 2004-11-17 10:47 PM

You have a way of sneaking up on the reader.

Like poetry in stocking feet.

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