Open Poetry #34 |
Silence |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
it is still – quiet . . . no breezes stirring with whisper words or chimes calling upon the wind no seduction woven in black upon white to blanket this woman in the chill of the day just the sounds of silence singing the lonely . . . s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh how I love those times...being alone sometimes seduces me....I know, I know, it sounds crazy, but I love those times of quiet silence....no loud radios, dogs barking, people yelling....the quiet that you have described is quit priceless and so valuable now it seems. Thank you hugs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm with Lee on this Susan. Many are the days I wish for quiet..silence.. to do as I wish..write perhaps, just do as I please. Well done! Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
seduction woven in black on white.... sometimes the silence sings... sometimes it weeps.... you've written it well ma'am... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You did indeed write silence well. Oh brother, do I love my silence. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
even in the silence Susan, I hear your song.... hugs. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
Nice write. Dautz Write |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you friends - am pleased to see all the words upon the blue pages to be read in the silence of the day - Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
no seduction woven in black upon white to blanket this woman in the chill of the day just the sounds of silence singing the lonely . . . Yes, most certainly...thank you Susan for the portrait you have painted. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ya got slayer on at 130 db...homeboy is singing in the shower..there is a herd of honda's buzzin in the parking lot and you are talking silence? pssssss did you hear me whisper? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiles - thank you friends - D- WHAT??? I CAN'T HEAR YOU! hehe - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet Susan, such silence can be so sweet. Linda |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
(...wind growls) i feel so cold, so lonely now. good read! ~Express Yourself~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You pen the silence well. Sometimes that "lonely" is just what the doctor ordered. Enjoyed. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The title may be silence..but the poem shouted loudly to me! Well done! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There is a healing power in one-ness, and lonely is drawn very well from a deep clear thought. Hugs, TD |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiling in warmth - thank you for your kind replies - Susan |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Applause!!, but with only one hand clapping, in keeping with the theme.. Enjoyed _________ice ><> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes I wish my neighbors would learn silence...James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"just the sounds of silence singing the lonely . . ." the ending says it best for me... well done |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
whether the silence is singing or weeping it is still better than some of the alternatives.. Loved this Susan! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree... well done. Excellent! JL |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmm- thank you friends - James - you crack me up - hehe Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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