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Venus At High Tide
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Venus At High Tide |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Tide at flood, Venus Lies under its taken path; Feet in deeper sea. * Little death, has made Mars feint Vulcan sleeps...and so she rests. Fluid is the dress, That covers her face and neck; That blurs opaque, she.. * Pipers wait near, patiently, Time of ebb to bare her waist; Its then that shore-birds, Comb the beach, that is her breast; And strain her sea-weed hair. * To all, her body she gives; All, she loves, both Gods and beasts. [This message has been edited by ice (11-16-2004 06:37 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Flooding waters drift Back to sea and trident's King Distress finds this heart Souvenier of pale beached shell Brings sea love songs back to me |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Karilea..... Great reply....  There is more to the story... My muse says I must add: To all she gave love, Except one, who scorned and ran; One she could not woo So says the bard of Avon, In a story he thought true. Shy Adonis fled, Towards a boars tooth through the heart; Life from him was bled. So she lived a life of vex, Vixen tears, the Goddess shed. Please add more, should you return... And this reaches your eyes.. _________ice/ford ><> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Little death, has made Mars feint Vulcan sleeps...and so she rests. Love those lines especially, as well as the entire collaboration with venus and mars. Beautiful work, I hope you are well, ford~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Statuesque carvings Marbled lines of curved appeal Entreat mans vision And heart, and soul, and longing Never they to realize Every line fools Men will see marble as flesh, Myth's reality All the while the spirit stays Goddess holds the magic ~*~ IF I come back? Don't you know I do? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmm- enjoyed this and its resonance - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a lovely ebb and tide duet you two have given us! BRAVO!  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Bluesey I am well, thank you..and thanks for the reply ================================ Karilea Marble white, and pearl Such fine lines catch a mans eye Statuesque, the word.. * Treats make pleasant entreatment, In lands of Gods or mortals. Thousands of them pass, Years, and decades, ages roll Still the myth promotes * Man to daydream fantasies, Of touching her marble breasts . ======================= Susan Glad you enjoyed... ======================= Kacy....ebb and tide is good fun, Thanks for dropping by Peace_________ice/ford ><> |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hello Ford, Another masterpiece. Love it yes love it. You and Sunshine should write one together. :-) Laters Within this heart you'll find love |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Great waves shall crash on Oceans will tide, marble stand All things being one Man shall reach in search of warmth Goddess to smile at his blush All it took was touch Mountains trembled, valleys rose Breath of wind expelled Miracles occur like this When hands extend to worship. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ford, I am so much enjoying the weaving of words between you and Sunshine. May I be bold and ask you two to please gift us with a duet? Excellent write!! ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hear, hear... I THIRD the motion. A duet from you two would be...hmmm... what is the word I am searching for??? FANTABULOUS!! ok, Ford/Karilea...........I'm beggin.. pleassssssseeee |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
hmmmm, wiccan? pagans? like incantations of some enchanting charm... i best not trance to deeply into your words, lest i become ensnared as well... |
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