Open Poetry #34 |
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Touche Ole |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Touché Ole I have touched touché With red flag The charge of the bull Ole And danced in leap In pirouette The head of the horns Of reap I have turned the sigh The plunge of why The weaving of the purge Of I And now I lay me down To sleep Perhaps to dream Or weep For now I sail the night Into horizons sun And catch the dew Of light |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I have touched touché With red flag The charge of the bull Ole And danced in leap In pirouette you serve up a mighty fine breakfast sir! Thank you |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Magical phrasing Sy. Much enjoyed!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have turned the sigh The plunge of why The weaving of the purge Of I ~*~ touché ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Sy! You sort of leapt into the morning! You left me a bundle of energy with this write. Magical indeed! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ole! Sail away in your dream ship to lands where you can touch the dew of light forever more! ![]() Love & Foreverlight, EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Me thinks Randy is needing to get out of the pen and do some rip snortin roarin' lol ![]() your "Touché" is my Ole ![]() *ww* ![]() ![]() ![]() when you walked into the room it felt like time was standing still. I felt fascination...then my heart gave me away. glass tiger |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
I like my police work better, I think it less dangerous. Either way, I enjoyed your write with much enthusiam. I like your outlook. Great read, Steve. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A smidge of variety intertwined herein. Ole! Dang bulls, if only they didn't have those horns to contend with.... Yeah, I would be in a dream afterwards myself if I had just done that marathon |
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