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Under My Skin
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Under My Skin |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ No one ever got under my skin as gloriously except the one who did. Like scented lotion rubbed in, I shimmered in the sunlight and basked under a blanket of stars. Floating on my back across foreign seas. I wear the winds where we were and the salt of my tears, releasing the sands of time that go with it. When I was with him he made me believe in Camelot and all would be right in my world that it is, and will be. Still, the way of things change only to remain the same though we've drifted past the sweeping horizon and still life in color. Yet I know there is a place I can go that will never grow old, and for that I am eternally grateful. To the he who remains so close to me always layered upon layers, under my skin. ~*~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (11-15-2004 04:02 AM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Bluesy Gal - this is so lovely and you're so lucky to have a "he" like that. Yes, I know the feeling of "under the skin" but I'm not as lucky as you. Take care of your heart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh what a feeling!!! glad to see you again ladybug, you've been quiet lately, or I just haven't been listening, one of the two |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy would be a tattoo there on some hidden skin would you keep me out of the sun? this was a lovely work babe |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Yet I know there is a place I can go that will never grow old, and for that I am eternally grateful. yes, there is that place, when we keep it close to us regardless of the curves thrown at us along the way...... so so nice to see my blondielocks grfiend stopping by  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
No one ever got under my skin as gloriously except the one who did. Like scented lotion rubbed in, I shimmered in the sunlight and basked under a blanket of stars. undenialbly lovely |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bluesy girl..this has to be the most beautiful piece you have penned. Full of hope and promise..lovely indeed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade This is a true BluesSerenade. Enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Lori "Still, the way of things change only to remain the same' Yes, you still write your heart so beautifully! It's good to see you, my friend.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Only you Lori, only you. How you reveal deep inside with metaphors. Ya' make me jealous. Nicely done again. Peace dear friend. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed .... yes its amazing how those special ones stay there Hope |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lori, I know this feeling you speak of all too well, As always you are a delight to read and one of the most amazing and inspring people and poets I know! Thank you for sharing your gift-- Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Some itches just have to be scratched.  Nice to see you back in the blue pages Lori-girl. Heart on sleeve poetry is your strong suit |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Lori, good to see you in our view again...and great that something good is under your skin...the other kind sorta sux. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks to each of you for taking the time to read me and finding my poetry worthy of your thoughtful replies. They mean a great deal to me, I hope you know that. My time is not my own these days and I've missed this place and all your passionate voices. Please know it warms my heart to come home and find the door left open. Thank you so much for being here~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yet I know there is a place I can go that will never grow old, and for that I am eternally grateful. To the he who remains so close to me always layered upon layers, under my skin. ************** Not only are you blessed to have this but blessed to recognize it and you share your heart wonderfully. Nice to see your name pop up and treat us to your visions. |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
Can relate... Enjoyed your poem. Dautz Write |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Under your skin....sounds like a nice place to be! Cozy in there..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and what lies under you skin Lori, is a soul of such beauty. I love your writes... heart hugs. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mark, your poetry as well as your replies light up these pages and are enough to turn my brown eyes blue, and bluer. Thank you for your kind and caring ways. Hi Dautz Write~ thanks for stopping by to read. And a warm welcome to you~ Ed~ I don't know how cozy it is, being careful what we wish for isn't always a matter of choice, but there's something to be said for staying power, and I am so very thankful for that, and him. I lost a good friend because my feelings got in the way, as though they weren't allowed. I think real friends are the ones who can forgive ones short comings as well as their own. My point being, some people don't think they have any. Hmmmmph!!! Thanks and hugs, it's so good to see you here. Hi Donna, thanks for the heart hugs and your sweet reply. Your gentle spirit is a blessing to so many. Love and hugs, honey~ Ericc~ I'm always so pleased to hear from you, it is much appreciated, and I thank you. |
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