Open Poetry #34 |
Chia Tao? |
~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
fresh grass misty morning cold dew on naked toes behind the sunbeams the majestic rainbow leprechauns dance in pots of gold children echo across creation the lands listens in silent awe laugh now sweet child the times are happy one day one life everything tends to change ~Express Yourself~ |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Very good. Very much in the mood. John |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
very nicely done! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely images of sunshine and rainbows until the end when the change came. Good job, nice even flow. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Love this Derrick! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
nice post. " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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