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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-11-13 03:15 PM

Picture by Alan Ayers

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I feel your lips on my cheek
It's like a kiss through a veil
I'm transported to heaven
Upon the wings of love I sail

I feel your soft caress
As you gently touch my face
You have me at your mercy
As our fingers interlace

Lips meet in anticipation
As we kiss, time stands still
Nothing could compare to
The way you make me feel

Your love leaves me breathles
You cast a spell so long ago
Since you came into my life
Love continues to bloom and grow

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-11-13 04:24 PM

Oh so beautiful Sue...
This is SO romantic!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-11-13 04:51 PM

Sue~
Perfect poetic *sighs*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-11-13 05:19 PM

pretty

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-11-14 07:00 PM

Beautiful!

Eric

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-11-14 07:49 PM

Simply beautiful -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2004-11-15 07:15 PM

Written words of a poetess who writes
with sincerity and a zeal beyond compare.

Nicely done, Sue.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2004-11-16 08:17 PM

Sue, this is so beautiful.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2004-11-16 08:43 PM

I am always so very grateful for your wonderful comments. Thank you so much.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Shelley
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 263
Ohio, USA

9 posted 2004-11-16 09:07 PM

"I feel your soft caress
As you gently touch my face
You have me at your mercy
As our fingers interlace"

This verse keeps jumping out at me!

Very Beautiful!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2004-11-16 09:09 PM

Thank you so much Shelley.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Dautz Write
Member

since 2004-11-16

Posts 96

11 posted 2004-11-16 09:30 PM

the gentle sense of love tucked away in a poem

enjoyed,
Dautz Write

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