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Open Poetry #33

I Dream of Suzie

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-07-30 07:25 PM

I Dream of Suzie

I like the way
her name sounds
when I say it
nice and easy.

I like the way
she looks, the
way she talks,
the way she acts,
casual yet breezy.

I like her soft skin,
her tender lips,
her femininity.

She fills my thoughts
throughout the day,
and in the evening
she doesn't elude me,
for after I fall asleep
then I dream of Suzie.

JamesLee
July30
2004

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-07-30 07:40 PM

Ah, sweet dreams to you . . .

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

2 posted 2004-07-30 08:07 PM

James, enjoyed.

I too knew a girl whose name was poetic, yet never incorporated it in a poem.

maybe someday.............

Contabo

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

3 posted 2004-07-30 08:46 PM

Beautifully written. Simply. Elegant. Classic love song is what I hear. I loved it.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-08-01 04:20 AM

Thank you Susan, Contabo and yv for the nice responses...I appreciate it...what are you waiting for Contabo...write some nice words for her...James

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