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Weep For The Moon
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Weep For The Moon |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Weep For The Moon By Paul Wilson Sadness covered the world tonight as lovers throughout the land cried Their tears were such a sad, sad sight shed for the lovers moon…that died Lost forever tender moments shared by lovers in moons enchanting glow Love died tonight and no one cared or maybe… they just didn’t know Falling stars wished upon by all have lost their way in dark of night No more tender moments to recall as lovers moon fades out of sight Lovers moon died a sad death tonight i’m told from a broken heart Teardrops washed away it’s soft light from this world...so I too will depart ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
stunning writing Paul just stunning. beautiful.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a wistful longing to this piece Paul. Beautifully written and it's SO good to read you again. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...just wow those ending lines...wow |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh no, did something happen while I was asleep? just kidding, Paul what a dreadful thought, no moon??? even the twinkling stars aren't a real substitute for what that ol moon man does for me |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hey Captain: You have a masterpiece in this write Paul! Wonderful. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
My, this was hauntingly sad, beautiful. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna...Thanks for the read and reply. Glad you liked it...Paul Nancy...Thanks dear lady for your kind words. Glad too be back for awhile...Paul Dixie... WOW is a very nice word. Thanks for taking the time too read and reply...Paul Kacy...LOL at your reply.You've got to keep an eye on that old man in the moon he might just sprinkle some of his magic moon dust on you. Thanks for the laugh and reply...Paul JL...How you doing my friend? It's been awhile since we last spoke. I hope all is well with you. Thats a pretty strong compliment and I thank you very much...Paul Susan...You described it very well. Thanks so much for taking time too read and reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ This *sighs*~ And beautifully so~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The moon is still very much alive, and quite large in the early morning sky, Paul...it's not going anywhere for a long, long time... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
James...Thanks for the read...Paul Marge...If only I had one of your lovely Moon pictures shaped like a heartbroken in half with tears falling from it. Thanks so much for your kind words...Paul Sunshine...This started a couple of nights ago while I was outside and looked up at the moon and thought to myself " What if there was no moon for us to stare at" Thanks for you reply and take care...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Touching write .... our moon must have an incredible memory in his core of all the sighs sent out to him! The connection is felt deeply in your words. Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The moon does draw our romantic natures; you wrote a beautiful poem, Paul. ....jo |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Ah my favorite subject you write so well If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul Just now I am waiting to see my first glimpse of tonights full blue moon...I know it will be here...the sky is clear and my eyes also. Enjoyed this poem of yours, and a different look at the subject. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Margherita...Thanks for the kind reply.Glad you enjoyed...Paul iliana...You are so very right. Thanks for taking time too read...Paul Moon Dust...I really appreciate your reply...Paul Martie...I hope you got to spend time with your moon tonight and enjoyed all it gives us. It must really be beautiful over the mountain's out there. Thanks for taking time to read & reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Paul, This truly is an excellent write of a melancholy thought. Well done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Larry...Glad you enjoyed.Thanks for the reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Paul, this is such an enchanting poem. A poem of such stunning imagery that, though it is about one who suffers a broken heart, it is a captivating piece. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ivy Rose...Thanks for taking time to read and for your tender reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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