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Open Poetry #33

I Will Be Going Home

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-07-30 10:57 AM

I know
Deep in my heart,
I love you
I miss you,
Iam missing you,
I bet
Even the sun don't come out,
Still be going home,
Still arrive on time,
Deep in my heart,
I know,
Iam missing you too much,
I will be going home (soon)
To see you,
I will be seeing you,
Soon,
I will the sun along,
To shine our dreams,
So I will thank you,
For everything you have done,
Lately,
Iam losing my mind,
As the wind blows,
On the west coast,
When I lost my heart,
On the way,
to home,
I keep singing
Till I get home,
I will be going home,
I will be coming soon,
To get your love,
Tonight.....

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2004-07-30 10:59 AM

Heartbreakingly beautiful...you weave incredibly strong feelings with your words...this one brought tears to my eyes...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-07-30 11:00 AM

vandana
A beautiful message.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-07-30 11:00 AM

Very beautiful Vandana...very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2004-07-30 11:02 AM

a perfect ending, Vandana

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-07-30 11:02 AM

Beautiful, is putting it mildly.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-07-30 11:28 AM

how precious

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-08-01 04:35 AM

Lovely...James

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-08-01 04:36 AM

Nice, sounds like it would make a good song! ......jo

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