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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-07-30 08:52 AM

Just Breathe

I find myself in anticipation,
of what I've yet to learn.
The beating heart of lonely thoughts,
the near of missing, the ache of yearn.

I find myself around the bend
anxious for what isn't here.
The silence of another day,
haunted by the touch of near.

What shall I do, where shall I go
when all is not in moment's seize?
A kaleidoscope of once upons,
a crimson thought, in warming breeze.

Of which I brush aside, the blush,
those thoughts that enter, runnning wild.
Thinking then on what was shared
fostering, unkempt, a smile.

Norah she, pretending I, to concert you
in shadow's touch.
The contact reaching, feeling fused
yet in resist, I miss you much.

Just a few, these words that probe
relenting not for now.
Exploring thoughts that intervene,
as timing will allow.

Timing yes, another treat
when taken in account
the you of you, the me of me
and tomorrows to surmount.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-07-30 08:58 AM

I love your strength....

whiskey

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since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

2 posted 2004-07-30 09:05 AM

Wow what a wonderful piece, so strong, enjoyed

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-07-30 09:21 AM

Thank you Karilea...it is warm and humid here today...but my brain seems to be working now

and you have email from the Lady.

Thank you Julie, it is always a treat to see and read you again.

M

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2004-07-30 10:31 AM

nicely done ms M

good to see you writing..and feeling a bit better perhaps.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2004-07-30 11:06 AM

WOW!!! Absolutely stunning...Its impact goes right to the heart....

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

6 posted 2004-07-30 11:30 AM

*warm smile*

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-07-30 11:48 AM

"Just a few, these words that probe
relenting not for now.
Exploring thoughts that intervene,
as timing will allow.

Timing yes, another treat
when taken in account
the you of you, the me of me
and tomorrows to surmount."

Excellent Maureen...warm heartfelt hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

8 posted 2004-07-30 01:15 PM

A fine piece, M.
Would love to hear you recite this, to get the full benefit of the rhythm.
I'm coming more and more to enjoy reading poetry aloud.

e

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2004-07-30 01:17 PM

I really like this one

Juju

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2004-07-30 01:19 PM

Another powerfully beautiful poem. Very touching!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

11 posted 2004-07-30 11:17 PM

you never know what is around the bend...

and that is a wonderful thing for an optimist.

Contabo

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