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whiskey
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0 posted 2004-07-30 08:04 AM



"Will you"

When you see my face
Look for my love see it upon
When you call my name
Find my love in me within
Do you want my all
Share my love release
When you look into my eyes
See my love deep within
When you hold my hand
Feel my love touch you
When you kiss my lips
Feel my love flow you into
When you hold me close
Feel my love through me to you
You are my one
Know my love hold my heart
Will you walk with me
Guide my love through eternity
Will you stand next to me
Love my all Own my soul

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

© Copyright 2004 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-30 10:34 AM


nicely done ma'am.. such questions are often hard to ask..
JL
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2 posted 2004-07-30 10:50 AM


A love story in the making.  Beautiful!

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Startime55
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3 posted 2004-07-30 10:52 AM


Questions asked from the soul painting a vision of eternal love...Wonderful...

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-07-30 10:56 AM


whiskey
That's a large order. Enjoyed

Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-07-30 11:39 AM


Very lovely Julie...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-07-30 11:43 AM


enjoyed this
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-10-24 12:52 PM


Enjoyed...James
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8 posted 2004-10-24 01:53 AM


lovely poem..just beautiful.

~Alli~

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