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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
She stood in painted face The only canvas in the place; Stilled by emotion, Faking calmness, Lacking inspiration, Draining from the stress, Facing facts unbelieving Tears washed her face As she broke to grieving. As requested closed the lid, Latching it from all stares, To stay finally forever hid In eternal shadows lair. Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What I love about your poetry is it is portraiture--it makes no demands of judgement, it's just there, showing IS for what it is... slices of life with Rembrandt lighting--meaning, that yes, you show moments, but with illumination from within the subject.  Sad and real and honest--you translate the ache of such observation lovingly, and not at all detached. applaud |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow gloom...what a write |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
It's a snap shot with words.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
one of those poems that I find hard to respond to... M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity said it all, and best... Thank you, Professor... |
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