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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

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0 posted 2004-07-06 09:06 PM

Her eyes,
    they weep.
Her head,
    lies deep.

  In the homeless drudgery.
Something I wish I could.
  Give to her for free.

Her eyes,
    look at me.
Her head,
    points to the ground.

   Embarassed I can see.
Saddness, three siblings.
   without food or shelter.

and then she smiles.
bringing tears to my eyes.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

© Copyright 2004 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2004-07-06 10:51 PM

ouch.

kaile

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2 posted 2004-07-11 04:01 AM

and then she smiles.
bringing tears to my eyes

what a haunting portrait

icebox
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in the shadows

3 posted 2004-07-11 04:16 AM

This cuts to the bone. Stark emotion with no apology.

Excellent phrasing. Thank you for sharing it.

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4 posted 2004-07-11 05:17 PM

one of your best snapshots, Kellie

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5 posted 2004-07-11 06:11 PM

Kellie~
Tender, tender emote~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-07-11 06:36 PM

I'm with icebox, this does cut. Such a sad state of being.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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