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Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

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State of constant confusion!

0 posted 2004-07-29 06:34 PM

Hi All! I was looking back over the poems I've written in the past few years and came across this one that Lone Wolf and I wrote together.

Jenn, wherever you are I hope the sun is shining brightly upon your beautiful heart

Thank you for always making time to write with me way back then. Love ya sis!

This poem is rendered in the voices of two people.

"Good-bye"

Man:       Saying good-bye is never easy
               But you know I've gotta go
               I never meant to hurt you
               And I want you to know
               Every time I hear our song
               I'll always think of us
               You deserve so much more
               My love is not enough

Woman:    No matter how hard I tried
               I couldn't make you see
               Would've given the world to you
               If only it was meant to be
               I want you to know this much
               Wouldn't trade one single day
               Although the pain is great
               I really have to say

Man:       We both came into this
               With visions of growing old
               Still clinging to each other's hearts
               How did it grow so cold?
               We had planned a life together
               Never dreamed that it would end
               Nothing left to hold onto now
               There's no use trying to pretend

Woman:    I'll never forget that warm day
               When you and I first met
               The sun reflected in your eyes
               And now that sun has set
               Even though this is over
               I hope that you know
               A part of me is with you
               Wherever you may go

Both:       How does one get over
               A love that once was true
               How does one say "good-bye"
               To a love the likes of you
               Maybe one day I'll find myself
               Falling in love again
               'Till then I'll have the memory
               Of the life that we had planned

[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (07-29-2004 07:05 PM).]

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 2004-07-29 06:37 PM

Ah...I remember this piece and like it as well today as I did then

elfine
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since 2004-06-08

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traveling

2 posted 2004-07-29 08:51 PM

I like the effect of the duet ... and the way each voice is "torn" in remembrance and hope. Thank you for welcoming me to Passions!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-07-29 08:56 PM

Jeffrey~
Ahhhhhhh ... as lovely as I remember it~
Hoping our Lone Wolf will return to us~
Surely this will call her 'home'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

4 posted 2004-07-30 02:11 PM

Thanks guys errrr .... girls!

I really miss my writing partner, hope she sees this

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