Open Poetry #33 |
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My Passion, My Kansi |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain ![]() |
![]() photo by: ladage author's note: kansi, chinese symbol for poetry, tattoo on my lower back "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." --Mother Teresa [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-27-2004 06:36 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Last line was my favorite.. Very well done. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snow That melted the snow. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Wow!!!!! When ever I click on you to read, I know somehow I'm in for some life altering emotional journey...a good one...how utterly poignant! |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
thank you all very much! snow "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
poetry is a passion, but a tattoo...I think not! Contabo |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
i didn't say that the tattoo was the passion. you don't understand the piece and that's fine with me. you weren't meant to. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
oh......... I understood the piece. you misunderstood me. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Absolutely gorgeous! I don't think I've read anything that just read itself like sensuality. Beautiful write! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
james, yv.... thank you both for reading and commenting. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Snow, I've read quite the number of yours in the past few days...as always, time well spent. Robert Joseph |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Snow, this is so beautifully written! Thanks for sharing it... ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I love this darling. It is so sensual...makes me want to...grrr! LOL! The passion is a tattooed heavy metal god of thunder. I think I might have heard you speak of him once or twice before. ROFLMAO! I love you honey...and this poem is now at the top of my list as my #1 favorite of the day. I am off to continue with the great siding adventure. Write later beloved. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Snow, I've read quite the number of yours in the past few days...as always, time well spent. Robert Joseph i appreciate that you spent the "past few days" reading anything by me, but i'm sure that for you, it probably just seems like what it was 4yrs ago. but thank you for the comment. snow |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Snow, this is so beautifully written! Thanks for sharing it... _,,,^.^,,,_ Florence ~~~ thank you so much for reading !!! |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
"I love this darling. It is so sensual...makes me want to...grrr! LOL! The passion is a tattooed heavy metal god of thunder. I think I might have heard you speak of him once or twice before. ROFLMAO! I love you honey...and this poem is now at the top of my list as my #1 favorite of the day. I am off to continue with the great siding adventure. Write later beloved." ~~ lol you crack me up, you know that don't you?what was that .. it makes you want to ... grrr? damn. i need to do that again. *smirk* this is #1 huh ? hmm.... interesting. i love you too babe. i bet that siding adventure is one hell of a day .. *laughing* cya later love. (thank you!!) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Passion and the exploration of same should always hold the enticement of new levels, new understandings, and the glimmer of knowledge from time spent in doing so. Very much enjoyed this piece and will look forward to more from your pen. |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
first.. i'm sorry the image is down. it would appear that photobucket is having a problem with part of their servers. since the 24hrs is up since i posted this i had to leave a note for a mod to edit for me. thanks for the patience of those that wrote me. mark, by your comment i guess you did get to see this today. i truly don't know how to tell you what your insightful comments have meant to me .... thank you very much!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There you go, Snow! Very nice! |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
((Hugs)) thanks so much!!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your words and thoughts alway touch me, Snow, and the illustrations blend beautifully *s M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are the best at these! |
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