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Open Poetry #33

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2004-07-29 02:29 AM

with my apologies to susan and jo--this one is just bugging and I'd like to work on it awhile.

(see? I'm nuts. I wasn't gonna sleep until it was poofed.)

thanks for reading and I'll see if I can fix this thang...

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (07-29-2004 06:59 AM).]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-29 02:51 AM

This classroom punishment leaves me kind of puzzled....it was a brilliant poem, but I am wondering if there is something underlying -- you okay?

.....jo

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-07-29 05:27 AM

"this does not exist for me"

I understand that...

I have my chants as well...

love you lady!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 2004-07-29 07:06 AM

This is a wonderful write gal....and the title?..delete..delete...delete...is one I'm so familiar with...LOL...okay...so work on it....when I work on one that much it's surely gonna be deleted by somebody

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-07-29 07:15 AM

I swear on all that I hold dear, when I read this I actually had the following thought:

"Oh this is nice, but Karen isn't going to be happy with it"

I swear, I just knew!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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