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Open Poetry #33
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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium
0 posted 2004-07-28 04:13 PM

Time crawls by
as a turtle
who is in a rush

Being with you
seemed an eternity,
a heavenly bliss
which never would leave

But right now...
now we only have memories
I realise
it wasn't that much at all...
© Copyright 2004 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-07-28 04:55 PM

"Time crawls by
as a turtle
who is in a rush"

There are times it seems that way.
Good write Kelly..much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-07-28 07:46 PM

Yes, I know this feeling.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-07-28 08:18 PM

"Time crawls by
as a turtle
who is in a rush"

What an interesting comparison...enjoyed....jo
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