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Me and Moon
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Me and Moon |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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You would think you could pick it right up from its spot as easily as if it were a yellow flower; a shining jewel, prominent between my eyes, balancing on my nose appearing as though it were me that shot it into the nightsky; yet the trees that are diminished by its magnitude remind of its abyssfull of distancing miles between; and how it can live in your eyes, or sneak behind your shoulder as you walk the path of silence, yet be as detached from you as you are from it; tonight the sun ran off, tucking itself into the black blanket sky, leaving me and moon suspended, staring across at eachoter through the lifeline that connects us somehow, through the bridge of an untouchable unseen sky, within these hours of love's fragility, that flicker like a baby's breath upon a candle, amid the confusion and the darkness of days past and possibly those to come, amid illusion and wishful thinking, selfdoubt and turmoil, this big little moon is my constant, my connection to god's heaven; we hang together between dawns of tiny raindrops through nights of a zenithfull of oceans on strands of faith woven upon unseen untouchable skies. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-28-2004 12:12 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
on strands of faith woven upon unseen untouchable skies. exactly what I needed to read today... thank you so much... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"on strands of faith woven upon unseen untouchable skies." Just lovely Michele!! Very much enjoyed this keeper Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Yes the moon can do all that.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"we hang together between dawns of tiny teardrops through nights of a zenith of oceans on strands of faith woven upon unseen untouchable skies" ditto.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
within these hours of love's fragility, that flicker like a baby's breath upon a candle, amid the confusion and the darkness of days past and possibly those to come, amid illusion and wishful thinking, selfdoubt and turmoil, this big little moon is my constant, my connection to god's heaven; Indeed Excellent writing |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"we hang together between dawns of tiny raindrops through nights of a zenithfull of oceans on strands of faith woven upon unseen untouchable skies." Awesome, Inkedgoddess! Love the imagery.  .......jo |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InkyOne~ 'tonight the sun ran off, tucking itself into the black blanket sky, leaving me and moon suspended' *sigh* *sigh* *sigh* *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You weave the vision so perfectly that I felt I was there too....Absolutely beautiful... |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
this has me starry eyed and full of moonbeams |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A treasure!! Well done Michele. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A powerful, magical vision beyond the "visible". You are beautifully moon-inspired! Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, you certainly are inspired by that orb which the multitudes have written of, dreamed of and sat watching endlessly in a clear sky above..... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome work |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"tonight the sun ran off, tucking itself into the black blanket sky, leaving me and moon suspended," ~ Yes, you truly are a goddess ~ of the moon!  EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loved this write tucking it safely into my folder |
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