Open Poetry #33 |
For You |
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I stay to my corner, watching, waiting, crying. I don't know you. I have read you. I have seen the wonders of your painting. Yet I never spoke a word to you. The world that is yours is familiar to me. I know the pain of your family. I wish you peace and pain free days. And I thank you, for showing me unending, unconditional, enduring, soul wrenching love. Through who you are and those that love you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm most certain, this person(s) feel the same love & graditude in their souls for you as in each of us, where would we be without the other? Tremendous smiles and warmth this one gives to the reader...thank you Have a wonderful day |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A good reaching-out write. May the distance between you close. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
MS SC, friend with out sharing breath..the truest perhaps, this was warmhearthugyawithmyeyesclosed enjoyed it |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely warm write Susan...makes the reader feel so good. Hugs sweet lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
And I thank you, for showing me unending, unconditional, enduring, soul wrenching love. so rare, but so blessed when we do receive this from another thank you for sharing your thoughts |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Lovely -- susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
susan, I am sure who this was written for is smiling...it most definately made me smile too. thank you.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely indeed Susan. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, the person you wrote this for could not help but feel the same way. ....jo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
you know...I actually thought it was so clear who this was written for that I didn't think I needed to say... But no...I think he is too ill to know... Michael... And thank you everyone for your kind replies. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Tears flow freely reading the purity of the love you feel for Michael and his family....Heart wrenchingly beautiful...**hugs** |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
susan how sweet you are...helen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan I knew exactly who you were talking about and this is a lovely and loving gesture...so open hearted. I applaud you! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done Susan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I knew who this was for immediately, Susan... a beautiful write M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I figured it out also...the painting, the pain....never really knowing them...Yes, many of us feel the same way of a man with a huge heart...we love him too. Thank You for expressing many of our own feelings. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Susan, This is a beautiful poem and heart warming gesture. miscellanea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I needed a "feel good" one tonight |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all! I don't know Michael but I sit back, completely amazed at the love and devotion between him and his wife and him and our pip members. May we all be so lucky in love. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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