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This Sorrow
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This Sorrow |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
To wipe a single tear... And taste the fullness of the ocean on my fingertip. This sorrow...I drown in such beauty. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh...what a consuming image plays in this write... To drown in the waters of emotions such as these, require no lifeline...excellent. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautifully expressed Eric...lovely indeed. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh, how lovely. To drown sorrow in beauty. Oh Eric, what a perfect image. This fits perfectly into the wisdoms I have been studying. Now I have the words and the image to keep with me when I feel sorrow, and I shall see the beauty in every moment...even ones of sadness. Yes! And your beauty, your words shall drown the sorrow. Magnificent, Eric! Patricia |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To wipe a single tear... And taste the fullness of the ocean on my fingertip. Exquisite!!! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
simply beautiful... ~tier  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Overwhelmingly soft and lovely! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I cannot say how much I enjoy reading your work. You are a minimalist master. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
So much emotion in so few words... Excellent! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done Eric, yes....you are a "minimalist master"....no bout a doubt it! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beauty is what I see before me....and I am drowning! Love and hugs ~ARH  "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968) |
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Paper Tiger Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 77 |
Short and sweet, and full of life. We see much, observe little, and perceive less. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I drown in your words |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
To feel and express as you've done here is wonderful. |
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