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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-07-26 05:03 AM

one of my favorite paintings

When MP3 (the reading was done before i did a bit of reworking on the piece)

"Flaming June" by: Frederick Leighton
when...

when will the ache
the twist that
binds my heart
my need
slowly unravel
to reveal
the shadow is
no longer on
the wall
of memory and hope
but here
under the sheets
against my back
within the safety
of your arm
tightly wrapped
around all the
nightmares
that came before
you

tell me....
when
oh night!
i fall into your hands
this dream i wish to
never end ... where he to me
and i to him, let tangle
limb to limb
and dream, perchance to find
within the mist of whisper's
kiss
laid upon the shivering
silver skin
by lips... oh lips they touch
the rise and fall of breath
... oh moon.. .. just tell me..
when

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa
[This message has been edited by Snow (07-26-2004 09:24 PM).]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-26 05:09 AM

Snow -- OMG, this is so full of tangibles. I could feel the ache. Beautiful poetry, purest Snow!

....jo

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2004-07-26 05:14 AM

awww sweetie, thank you so much!! this is one of my favorites, i'm so glad you enjoyed it !!
i had hoped to get in some reading but it has just now started to lightning and thunder.. and this desert lily is going to shut it down and go soak it up :-)

again.. thank YOU!!! (i saw you had a new post, it will be my first read later on ) hugs... snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

3 posted 2004-07-26 07:17 AM

wow, i had never listenened to audios before because, well, just because i never have...lol. I can honestly say it makes it a thousand times more real. Fantastic.
And thats a cool painting as well.
chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-07-26 08:17 AM

enjoyed very much!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-07-26 09:19 AM

Wish I could hear it, I'll have to have my husband help me when he's home again. But the words read beuatifully.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2004-07-26 09:44 PM

chris, thanks! i'm glad you enjoyed the reading.

susan c... thank you for saying so!

susan... i appreciate your reading and leaving a comment. thank you!!
snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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