Open Poetry #33 |
To Know The Sky... |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Empty of words... This cloud drifts without a verse. Leaving nothing in its wake. I seek to know the sky - And chasing clouds...I leave my words behind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From my part of the world to yours... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always thankful for that |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Though brief, this carries many beautiful visions within it. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
All of your poems have a true sense of their words.....another one here, Eric.....enjoyed! ....jo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Seeking love in it's highest plane is admirable and desirable... The lift here was certainly appreciated. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
drifting right along.............. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric As always, lovely!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like this one (when don't I, dear Poet). I often used to lay out and watch the clouds float past while words of poetry followed in their wake. Nice. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this beauty gave me chills Very much enjoyed |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
chasing clouds leaving words behind... and very good ones at that! misc'e |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beyond words there is Love. And your chasing the clouds is a sacred play where your soul captures treasures to share ... as you do so beautifully! I love you. Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful!! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice Ericc. Much enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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