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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-07-24 01:51 PM



Empty of words...

This cloud drifts without
a verse.

Leaving nothing in its wake.

I seek to know the
sky -

And chasing clouds...I leave my
words behind.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-07-24 02:14 PM




From my part of the world
to yours...

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-07-24 02:15 PM


always thankful for that
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3 posted 2004-07-24 02:23 PM


Though brief,  this carries many beautiful
visions within it.  

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4 posted 2004-07-24 04:21 PM


All of your poems have a true sense of their words.....another one here, Eric.....enjoyed!   ....jo
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-07-25 10:30 AM


Seeking love in it's highest plane is admirable and desirable...
The lift here was certainly appreciated.
TD

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6 posted 2004-07-25 10:07 PM


drifting right along..............
Martie
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7 posted 2004-07-25 10:23 PM


Eric

As always, lovely!!

Susan
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8 posted 2004-07-26 09:35 AM


I like this one (when don't I, dear Poet).  I often used to lay out and watch the clouds float past while words of poetry followed in their wake.  Nice.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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9 posted 2004-07-26 09:48 AM


this beauty gave me chills
Very much enjoyed

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10 posted 2004-07-26 10:02 AM


chasing clouds

   leaving words behind...
  
and very good ones at that!  

         misc'e

Margherita
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11 posted 2004-07-26 11:39 AM


Beyond words
there is Love.
And your chasing
the clouds
is a sacred play
where your soul
captures treasures
to share ...
as you do so
beautifully!

I love you.
Margherita

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12 posted 2004-07-26 12:57 PM


Absolutely beautiful!!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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13 posted 2004-07-26 01:04 PM


Very nice Ericc. Much enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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