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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Unlocked You need a tender loving touch For you to open like a flower. Others have not cared that much To see your passion's power. I know you need only tenderness To unlock your sensual soul. So I lovingly let each soft caress Linger gently to make you whole. For you are truly a treasure I promise to love forever. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Well done, a delight to read. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Sy. I always appreciate your kind comments and support. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What person wouldn't love a dedicated touch? |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Dedication is the key. Thank you Karilea. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oooh, how beautiful is this then?!! scorpio I am tucking this one into my library! Hugs, Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Chris. Very kind of you indeed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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lgina Member
since 2004-07-20
Posts 52 |
For you to open like a flower.-----I like that alot being into flowers some open fast some slowly and some even continue to grow. powerful to me. thank lgina |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And this is certainly a very nice and heartfelt dedication to one loved as deeply as the words conveyed. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Igina. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you Dixie. Barry thank you for your kind reply. believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
scorpio -- this was precious! Your touch of your pen was just perfect! ......jo |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Jo. I'm pleased you liked this. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
To know the tremble and the passion of a dream, and to know in your heart that this dream is real, is to know the magic of love. You wrote this for a very special and lucky lady dear Scorpio. Very beutifully penned straight from your heart. ~Smiles, Hugs & Love ya, Tinker~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker, she is very special. I'd be lost without her. Thank you for your beautiful reply. And thank you for the smiles and hugs. believe in what your heart feels... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Unlocked. An veryyy appropriate title for this recipe to fulfillment. Enjoyed misc'e |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you for reading and commenting Miscellanea. It's a recipe that cooks. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
scorpio, with a poem such as this, you could transform a simple tulip into a lotus blossom of a thousand petals ~ with each petal opening up to reveal delightful inner treasures for your enjoyment.  L-o-v-e-r-l-y...  EA |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
very nice scorpio very nice chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A wonderful thought Linda. I have a fondness for lotus blossoms. Thank you. Thank you Chris for you reply. Much appreciated. believe in what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
A very tender, loving piece of work. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a lovely invitation |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you James. Very kind of you. Susan I appreciate your support. Thank you. Thank you Inkedgoddess. All one can do is ask. believe in what your heart feels... |
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