Open Poetry #33 |
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Fallen |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia ![]() |
Fallen You Came to me Like a dream in the night Captavating My thoughts Holding me Within Engulfed By visions of you Dancing Across my mind Hungry For more of you Each second Spent with you My love grows Deeper, Stronger Entangling My Love with yours How I long For you To be in your arms You Holding me Your Breath Upon my skin I want to Feel you in body As I do in soul To meld Two into One "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
nice... very nice chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Two into one.....that is the way it should be.....enjoyed. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
A very well written longing! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
enjoyed |
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