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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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This Quip On this quip or ship of life I steer by lodestone of my wife Chase horizons never there Through the rainbow and nightmare It seems forever morning’s fate To search the days of mornings wait Loaded down with weights of clay No mater how I neigh or bray I charge into the paradox On coffee bagel and some lox Shade the sun from overheat And go about my daily beat And low the day comes to end Slows my rack of pain and bend To raise my fain of argosy To find my vain of ecstasy And thought I pan this addict gold I fear my mind is getting old. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Morning there Good read Smile Jes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jes Good morning and thank you for the read and reply. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
never too old to leave us a pleasureable read each morning  M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thank you sweety.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy aged as fine wine..but never old. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you my friend. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But in my old I find more bold, or at least the beast of me is stayed; so I write of lox, then paradox, and poets come, leaving hugs in box... *click* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine   |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
nahhhhh I wouldn't worry, your as sprite and astute as they come... and if anyone tells you different, punch em right in the nose and tell em all the poets here at PIP said it was ok to do so. Smile and hugs Good 1st morning read Happy Friday |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I charge into the paradox On coffee bagel and some lox Shade the sun from overheat And go about my daily beat" Coffee? Does this mean no more tea? What am I to do by myself in the mornings? Oh...you will have a cup. Great! I'll pour. And Sy? You.... old? NEVER!! ~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ My nose punching days are way, way behind me. LOL But thanks for the nice reply. Nancy I'd never pass up your tea. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sy, Old? You? Your poetry, whether with a few hints of melancholy or simply vibrant, it smiles a happy rhythm behind a man with crisp thoughts. Have a great day, Sy! misc'e |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
misc'e, You are kind. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, dear Seymour. You're not gettin' older ... you're gettin' better!! Wonderful write. Thankyou for this. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
With age comes wisdom. You have that wisdom portrayed here. Great write! JL  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you sweet. JL Thank you dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
youre not old me sweet Sy-guy...just some days our dragons are draggin LOL We will just have to get Randy roaring!!  *ww*  I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You will never grow old, Seymour. Never! I am so glad I could stop by and read you again...so much wisdom from such a young man! Patricia |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
:-) i enjoyed this read very much! snow "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
As my Dad would have said, "and such are the vissitudes of life!" Enjoyed this, Seymour. Do have a good day! .....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your right this Randy dragon is draggin. WWRS Patricia from a young man.Snow Enjoyed your bit of snow. LOL iliana The day is gone, I'll try for a good night. LOL |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love the rhyme...and I do understand And thought I pan this addict gold I fear my mind is getting old. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Glad you understand, I don't. LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your body may grow old with the passing of time, but your mind and spirit will remain forever young!  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel And that's why you're my Angel. |
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