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EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2004-07-23 12:22 PM

Ice Castles

Suffer hoarfrost fingers that burrow deep,
In thy citadel of dubious sleep.
Yea the cold thee savors' within the heart,
Will forthwith milady tear thee apart!

I am the specter, which frequents your dreams,
The yearning that weds thee to higher themes,
A semblance of unspoken desires,
I'll love thee 'til time...aye time...expires.

Ice castles though fetching are naught but ice,
And methinks mayhap they can not suffice,
'Tis warmth and calenture that bridges love,
O' gentlewoman is that undreamt of?

To thee I gush like the flowing ebb tide,
Frequencies of light in arms I’ve flung wide.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2004-07-23 01:17 AM

ok .. *tears* now ya did it... the flood gates are open...... you...when i can find my words, i'll come back.... <3 ~ me

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-07-23 01:38 AM

Ooooooooooh, this is good, Kevin!

Really, really, really liked it! ........jo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-07-23 03:01 AM

wow

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2004-07-23 02:38 PM

wow indeed and it shouldn't slip so fast ... *s* <3

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2004-07-23 07:45 PM

Love it Dear Kevin.

;-)

amour vous

:-)

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-07-23 07:49 PM

Beautiful!! Good one.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2004-07-25 02:24 AM

EV2

nice... especially like the ending

To thee I gush like the flowing ebb tide,
Frequencies of light in arms I’ve flung wide.
misc'e

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-07-25 09:42 AM

I, in return, flung my arms wide open in anticipation ~ then I realized, alas, that your impassioned words were not written for me.... Oh, dearie me! ~ however, it was a pleasure beyond compare while my fantasy lasted!

Love & Light,
EA

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2004-07-25 09:44 AM

Wonderful write Kevin...
Beautiful words....sigh.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2004-07-25 09:59 AM

Well done Kevin. Passionate.

believe in what your heart feels...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2004-07-25 11:26 AM

Very well done Kevin, enjoyed the wordplay
within this piece. You worked hard to get
it as is...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2004-07-25 11:57 AM

EvocativeVerse2
Excellent, need I say more.

sneaker_girl
New Member

since 2003-10-30

Posts 2

13 posted 2004-08-04 03:16 PM

WOW! Can I take you home?

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2004-08-04 09:10 PM

Kevin, I would love to hear you read this one.
*clapping* a beautiful write

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

15 posted 2004-08-05 05:27 PM

Beautiful write

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