Open Poetry #33 |
One More Road |
Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
One more road to cross, Can't dwell on one loss. One more risk to take, Live life like there's one more move to make. One more road to cross. Jump in on free will, Heart stop pleasnantly still. One more road to cross. In our souls life chews a hole through, And in the end there isn't much we can do. One more road to cross. Just one more road to cross, On the other side grows the moss. One more road to cross. Fresh out of the asylum we came, Searching for fortune and fame. One more road to cross. Look beyond all that, Pick yourself up off the mat. One more road to cross. Find your inner being, Then you will begin seeing. One last road to cross... Victims....aren't we all. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...and so it goes...you've got it down... I'd like to see this write set to a tune... is it? dig your picture... ~K~ |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i dont know i dont think i set it to a tune..and thanks everyone wants me to get rid of my pic |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
keep the picture write the tune.... ~K~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Kyle...this hould be set to music... Good write. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes, one more road to cross, but still the journey is worth taking. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
seems like there is always one more road to cross... bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, always another. And, I concur this might sit well in music. Enjoyed! .....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Interesting write. Got me thinking, one more road to cross... SG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May all your future roads be easy, Dear Flakes From Hades. Happy 4th hugs, EA |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
When I read it, I thought it should be set to music, too! |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
enjoyed this |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
good job youngun... |
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