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Open Poetry #33

Voiced To Hollow Alms

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-07-22 10:29 PM

T’will be sunset on the lake of lavender
Speak now to the hollows
My palms upturned as dream catchers
And raise my heart to set the sky beside
For not the present or the past complied
Speak now to the hollows
As love the alms of light

Copyright Kkh 7/22/04

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2004-07-22 10:44 PM

Goodness, this is awesome!!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-07-22 10:48 PM

soft as sunset's fading hues, this is a sight to behold, very warm words

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-07-22 10:48 PM

These leaves me with a sense of awe, TD! Much enjoyed!

....jo

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-22 10:50 PM

Glad to see this back around. I enjoyed this even more this time.

....jo

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-07-23 10:11 AM

Spectacular! Very intriguing write.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-07-23 10:12 AM

Wow! Intake breath, slowly release. This was exquisite T.D.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2004-07-23 04:09 PM

My palms upturned as dream catchers.

Ohhhh, do I love this! Wonderful work, TD!

Patricia

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

8 posted 2004-07-23 05:49 PM

can words be more beautiful then these you have penned...........

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2004-07-23 07:53 PM

The view is awesome from here...well done
K. your candles burned brightly last night.

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