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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2004-07-22 07:46 PM

          beyond all nets

beyond all nets
                     past railings
                 here
                     where even spirits
                  may
                     embrace
           may kiss

                     this high
            uplifted
                     place
      this turning
                    out beyond
         the rising
                    path
           we walk

                    I’ve fallen
            already
                    to your
      lips’ rescue

                    there is
            only up

                   up toward
         the place
                    of no
              falling
                    ever

~~J

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-07-22 08:10 PM

I’ve fallen
already
to your
lips’ rescue

very romantic...

M

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-07-22 08:13 PM

Jamie

"I’ve fallen
            already
                    to your
      lips’ rescue"

Very romantic, indeed...with a sigh!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-07-22 09:30 PM

very nicely done! enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-22 11:07 PM

Nice, very nice!

....jo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-07-22 11:14 PM

Very nicely written...
love the presentation as well.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2004-07-23 07:09 AM

When you go beyond the nets...
you're utilizing faith.

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

7 posted 2004-07-23 10:35 AM

Faith, and confidence.

~~J

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

8 posted 2004-07-25 02:27 AM

only up only

enjoyed form and voice

misc'e

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-07-25 03:40 AM

I love this format here...great theme!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2004-07-26 10:46 AM

good write and read, very romantic...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2004-07-29 03:46 PM

                    I’ve fallen
            already
                    to your
      lips’ rescue

Yes... that would be beyond all nets... and still a web of safety surrounds. *S*

Beautiful work!!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

12 posted 2004-07-29 04:48 PM

with love, no nets are needed

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

13 posted 2004-07-29 05:48 PM

Ok, I guess I'll be the first guy to reply to this by saying WTG! This is a beautifully written piece! Now, share that muse would ya?

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