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Just a hazard in the way
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Just a hazard in the way |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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Yesterday becomes Today Today becomes Tomorrow Suddenly halting life why isn't everything right Deep sea memories. tears swell in the dead of night death don't do me part, I'm not ready to say goodbye. formerly a hazard to myself but that just wasn't me deep green tears of an ocean leaking, into a river. Rushing me around. I was just a hazard in the way |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
such a sad one.... beautifully done.... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
But aren’t we all that way? Maybe different situations… Much earnest feeling in this read. A beauty… JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Thanks. This is just a reflective piece. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very reflective...but I see you more as a light warning us away from the hazards...  |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Sunshine- Thank you. You are a ver inspirational person. I appreciate you very much. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kellie, this really aches; you got the point of the poem through very well. ....jo |
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