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All this time
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All this time |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 All this time did you know? You have always been my heart’s deepest desire the wish whispered on edge of sleep the best secret, my soul could ever keep All this time did you know? Yours was the kiss~ by which all others were measured by which all others, fell short of leaving an ache in me for that kind of love and that it’s still unmatched today All this time did you know? I have loved you from the moment we met and for every second of every day that has since followed and that I will always.... always love you. ~SEA~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Song of the heart! Very nice SEA. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You had me at hello...hehehehe seriously, this was right from the center of your heart, written with much passion very well done! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
sweet write from a sweet gal... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gawd this is SOOOO beautiful!!! Hugs sweet lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful!! Eric |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I can totally relate. I feel the statement ... "Don't know what you got till it's gone." That's when you can honestly tell it was real. You expressed your feelings really well. *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I really liked this.....secrets expressed lovingly written! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All this time did you know? You have always been All this time did you know? Yours was the kiss~ All this time did you know? I have loved you ~*~ Even the condensed version is affirmation! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved this |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"the wish whispered on edge of sleep" ~ such a wish is the heart's deepest desire. Soft as a whisper...  EA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you all so very much for your kind, wonderful replies....it means a lot to me |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
SEA Lovely, lovely! That first stanza is so very powerful, it could stand alone. In fact, I thought it the entire poem until I scrolled. It interprets the painting to a tee, SEA. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sea sweetest sister of my heart and singer of my soul’s song, OH my this is just incredibly lovely, I love this, I utterly, utterly, utterly, utterly, love this. Its simply exquisite. I should know that it would have had your name appended to it, no one does it like you darling one, absolutely no one  Love and warm stuff as always Big hugs, and warm smiles, Mushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this makes for an awesome Hallmark card |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You made me feel the ache and that is just great writing.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
All this time did you know? You have always been my heart’s deepest desire the wish whispered on edge of sleep the best secret, my soul could ever keep All this time did you know? Yours was the kiss~ by which all others were measured by which all others, fell short of leaving an ache in me for that kind of love and that it’s still unmatched today ============================== Oh girlie..this was so cool of you to write for me... rofl...heh  OH...not for me???? silly moth...  this one just had to be written by you... its classic SEA poetry and thats a very good thing. I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Told and written by a heart that knows what a heart shall contain. Pretty smiles and best wishes for that wish. Smile Jes |
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