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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Denial What time on earth should we spend? What time in space? Mars, Venus, or any planet’s moon our friend? Do those places need our grace? You said the earth was your mother… Do you think she might be jealous of another? If you did, visit that is…could you stay for a while? Maybe for as long as it takes for you to get over your denial… |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW! Interesting thoughts! Great write! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great write, JL. Now, I have to think about it!!! You have a valid point!  ....jo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hmmmmm, strange how your poems seem so sublimital... JL, your a peach....thank you for writing and sharing...smiles and hugs |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
No denial about it... I enjoyed every line. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You said the earth was your mother… Do you think she might be jealous of another? ~*~ Ah, so that was the reason the earth shook... *smile* Well done, Sir. |
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