Open Poetry #33 |
Scrambled eggs |
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Hope fringes skip toward gleeeee upon finger songs trilling from soprano to guttering bass and you, you would make tears dwell back in the throat rumbling purr claws sheathed after but we, in sharing the knows, I, you, we, this is how and why memories shine. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Hope fringes skip toward gleeeee upon finger songs trilling from soprano to guttering bass" I liked this a lot |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"and you, you would make tears dwell back in the throat rumbling purr" Oh yes Deca!! Sensual write this hot muggy morn. Love it!! Love it!! Love it!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I, you, we"... My favourite kind of "scrambled eggs"! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame I like mine with Ketchup. LOL enjoyed the read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca Yummy! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
dem eggs you got cookin? seesm there is more cookin here than just spam and cackleberries kewl snackies ms |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, oh yes. Popping this pearl into my library! hugs, Chrislane Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"but we, in sharing the knows, I, you, we, this is how and why memories shine." Sometimes I think that no memory is real unless at least one other person shares it. I like the feel of this poem, serious underneath but with that childlike gleeee shining through everything! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Perfection, Deca. Pure perfection! Patricia |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thoroughly enjoyed reading about your "scrambled eggs!" .....jo |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very interesting. Enjoyed. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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