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For Your Eyes Only
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For Your Eyes Only |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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For Your Eyes Only Flushed with the warmth of the day half dressed, trying to make light of my mood, passing my feelings to the quiet hum of the summer air, knowing this is just the beginning of another day. Checking out those lines that only yesterday burned, seeing me as I am, my mirrored deception, wondering why those others pain me in look. Folding small, that which yesterday was tight fitted, showing off to no one, but awakening the turn of time to play my dreams once more... for your eyes only. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
for your eyes only. YEPPERS M....sometimes the only eyes that need to see are the ones we want to be able to see. Well done M. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
So true, I can relate. Well written "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Don't forget the importance of seeing yourself with your own loving and appreciative eyes!  ~ and btw, my cyber eyes can see that you are looking fantabulous!  EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetWynterGal~ 'Folding small, that which yesterday was tight fitted, showing off to no one, but awakening the turn of time to play my dreams once more... for your eyes only.' *smiling* at you~ BEAUTIFUL thought lines~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, In other words play it again sam. Enjoyed the read. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Checking out those lines that only yesterday burned, seeing me as I am, my mirrored deception, wondering why those others pain me in look. hey, what works at the time, right...a place we've all been. This was an excellent write and read...thank you for sharing...big hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always love to read your feelings |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Too many great lines here to choose my favourite M. I know this feeling well. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You tell it like you see it! Wonderful write. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, some well penned, Maureen. ....jo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This was soooo worth the read. I enjoyed this so much! Thanks. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Little Mo, this is so YOU, each word reverberates with your essence, Oh how this makes me smile. I can see you in my minds eye reading this, and hear, if I try really hard, your soft voice stroking my ears with your words. Beautifully done darling heart, absolutely wonderfully expressed and such a superb poem from you. I love it utterly, utterly, utterly as always Mushy    Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I like this much, Maureen. Geez, I forgot how good it is to be here at PiP. You reminded me quite nicely. Hugs, Patricia |
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